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🌊🚢 Island Adventure Awaits! 🌿

Join us for a day of adventure on Rottnest Island! Stroll through town, enjoy a relaxing lunch, and soak in the island’s breathtaking scenery, wildlife, and crystal-clear waters.

📅 Tuesday, 4 March

📍 Meeting point: Hillarys Boat Harbour by 9:00 AM
(Boarding closes at 9:45 AM – Don’t be late! The ferry WILL NOT wait ⏳)

🚢 Ferry departs: 10:00 AM

💰 Tickets: $35 + booking fees (Non-refundable)

🔗 ECU Guild members only – No +1’s

🎟️ Spots are limited! Check the FAQs & Waiver before booking.